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Actually there were a few things you did wrong in the article (forgive my pessimism). Firstly, you need to put the article's name in '''bold''' at the beginning of the article (e.g. '''Pyoro S''' is a mini-game...) Also, put game names in ''italics'' (e.g. ''[[WarioWare: Smooth Moves]]'') And most importantly, '''don't use the word "you"'''. Use the words '''the player''' or '''they''' instead. There were a LOT of "you" words in your article you created. Still, good job with making the article. {{user:Mario jc/sig}} | Actually there were a few things you did wrong in the article (forgive my pessimism). Firstly, you need to put the article's name in '''bold''' at the beginning of the article (e.g. '''Pyoro S''' is a mini-game...) Also, put game names in ''italics'' (e.g. ''[[WarioWare: Smooth Moves]]'') And most importantly, '''don't use the word "you"'''. Use the words '''the player''' or '''they''' instead. There were a LOT of "you" words in your article you created. Still, good job with making the article. {{user:Mario jc/sig}} | ||
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Actually there were a few things you did wrong in the article (forgive my pessimism). Firstly, you need to put the article's name in bold at the beginning of the article (e.g. Pyoro S is a mini-game...) Also, put game names in italics (e.g. WarioWare: Smooth Moves) And most importantly, don't use the word "you". Use the words the player or they instead. There were a LOT of "you" words in your article you created. Still, good job with making the article. 
Mario JC
