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Remove "adorned with the Snowmad insignia" in the sentence describing Pompy's appearance as the character's helmet does not display the Snowmads' insignia. | Remove "adorned with the Snowmad insignia" in the sentence describing Pompy's appearance as the character's helmet does not display the Snowmads' insignia. | ||
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Also, please stop changing numerical words to more fancy and increasingly complicated group terms like "quintet". There's nothing wrong with just using simple numbers to describe how many of something there are, which are straightforward and universally understood, and changing these just makes it less clear to the reader (and goes against [[MarioWiki:Good writing#Epic.2C_flowery.2C_and_grimdark_writing|MarioWiki:Good writing]], which I suggest reading since most of your edits revolve around changing the wording of articles). {{User:Mario jc/sig}} 23:57, October 2, 2023 (EDT) |
Revision as of 22:57, October 2, 2023
Show preview
Please use the "Show preview" button next to the "Save page" button to see what your edits look like before saving them, otherwise making consecutive edits floods the recent changes and history pages. Mario JC 20:42, October 17, 2020 (EDT)
Physical descriptions of enemies are valid information. Please do not remove them, and if you're going to remove something, at least give a reason why. Mario JC 21:10, October 17, 2020 (EDT)
Pipe linking
Please stop trying to make multiple pipe links in a single word. Nightwicked Bowser
Removals
Please don't remove valid content such as quotes from articles without giving a reason. Nightwicked Bowser
Hellen Gravely's antagonist status
Hellen Gravely's role in the game is too large for her to be considered a "secondary antagonist". "One of the main antagonists" is more accurate in this context so please stop changing that. Also, "put under too much stress" regarding showing her true form isn't very accurate either, she is clearly straight-up enraged at those points. Nightwicked Bowser 06:04, August 1, 2021 (EDT)
Tiki Tak Tribe
Please stop re-adding your edits after they've been reverted and check the history page before doing so. When has it ever been stated it was a "centuries-long slumber"? If it's never been stated as such, you shouldn't put a number on it. Mario JC 22:36, February 2, 2022 (EST)
I see you took it from Tiki Tong, but if it's already tagged with {{ref needed}}, it's probably a good idea not to spread it any further. Mario JC 22:40, February 2, 2022 (EST)
Commas
You just got off a block for this; do not remove valid content without giving a reason. Also, don't remove commas from multiple adjectives like "large, gray Hootz"; those are grammatically correct. Mario JC 11:10, September 17, 2022 (EDT)
DJ Phantasmagloria
In both of the article's mention of "an octuplet of Goobs", change "octuplet" to "octet".
Pompy
Remove "adorned with the Snowmad insignia" in the sentence describing Pompy's appearance as the character's helmet does not display the Snowmads' insignia.
Previewing / number words
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Also, please stop changing numerical words to more fancy and increasingly complicated group terms like "quintet". There's nothing wrong with just using simple numbers to describe how many of something there are, which are straightforward and universally understood, and changing these just makes it less clear to the reader (and goes against MarioWiki:Good writing, which I suggest reading since most of your edits revolve around changing the wording of articles). Mario JC 23:57, October 2, 2023 (EDT)