Talk:Mario Kart DS

PAIRreview for Mario Kart DS by SaudyTalk! 17:20, 22 July 2007 (EDT)
Accuracy	3.5	Er... Its accurate. Yay.
Depth	3.0	Actually, there isn't a whole lot of depth for such a long article.
Grammar	3.0	I found few mistakes, could use a little work there.
Images	3.0	This article is OVERWHELMED with images. I suggest taking out a few.
Formatting	3.0	Er... Its fine. Most of it. Again, the images throw it off a bit.
Final Rating:	15.5	I think the article could use a mite bit of work, but overall its fine.
Reviewer:	SaudyTalk! 17:20, 22 July 2007 (EDT) doc

PAIRreview for Mario Kart DS by Cobold (talk · contribs) 06:14, 23 July 2007 (EDT)
Accuracy	3.5	Might need some tweaks in the item & mission mode (not table) section, but overall accurate.
Depth	3.0	In-depth article, but not too in-depth regarding the length.
Grammar	1.5	Some grammar mistakes, many times reffering directly to the reader, point of views, exclamation marks. The Wi-Fi connection issues example lacks neutral point of view.
Images	3.0	Number of images is reasonable, but some may not fulfill any purpose.
Formatting	3.0	The WiFi and Download Play sections should appear in one block, but are separated by gameplay instructions. Karts table would need a legend.
Final Rating:	14	The article needs an overall review regarding you's and "deadly items". When a neutral point of view is reached, it can be perfect.
Reviewer:	Cobold (talk · contribs) 06:14, 23 July 2007 (EDT) doc

I know I worked this article the most, but, anyone else who helped, thanks! If you can think of anything else to improve, do it. Wa _T^C_@^Y 11:12, 2 January 2007 (EST)

In my opinion, the items section should be higher up in the article. Otherwise, it looks great! Eric42 15:35, 2 January 2007 (EST)

Shy Guy picture

The picture of the shy guy is overlapping with the characters picture gallery (with a 1024*768 res). Any way to make it fit? --Cobold 13:20, 23 January 2007 (EST)

Ah, my 1280 X 1024 res made the pic too big. Is that better? Wa _T^C_@^Y 15:40, 23 January 2007 (EST)

Yep, I can see Yoshi now. Thanks. --Cobold 16:04, 23 January 2007 (EST)

Eight-person play

MK DS is not the first Mario Kart to feature 8-person play. Double Dash featured up to 16-person play in LAN mode. --Cobold

Mission 3-1 Is Wrong

I have received information that the description for Mission 3-1 is incorrect. DBM11085 has a FAQ at www.gamefaqs.com that says the objective for Mission 3-1 is "Destroy all 5 item boxes!" If someone could correct this article as soon as possible, that's be good. --Litnin200

Wow – no idea how that got there. Maybe it was right before and someone changed it. I'll re-look up the mission ASAP and fix it – thanks - Wa _T^C_@^Y 18:14, 15 March 2007 (EDT)

Looking at history, looks like I simply missed one initially in December 2006. Also, Litnin200, you're free to fix it. Wa _T^C_@^Y 18:16, 15 March 2007 (EDT)

Picture in trivia section

Just a small question. The illustration of a emblem shown at the bottom of the screen appears to me not to be of Tamagon, but instead of Bub from the Bubble Bobble series of games. Just wondering if that caption needed to be changed. -Elias5891

Looks more like Bub to me, too. I vote change. YELLOWYOSHI398

Son of Suns added that fact. I'll ask him to recheck the image, and I'll remove it if necessary. Wa _T^C_@^Y 18:10, 22 April 2007 (EDT)