MarioWiki:Featured articles/Unfeature/N2/Beldam

Beldam

Remove Featured Article Status

1. Ashley and Red (talk)There ia a rewrite template. The trivia section is very large and has poor elements (e.i The Magic of Oz thing) and there are some words in oast tense that should be in present.
2. Mario (talk) My god, that history section.
3. Icemario (talk) With a history section like that, I find it hard to believe this was actually successfully featured.

Keep Featured Article Status

1. Epic Rosalina (talk) I've been waiting to do this for awhile, and I finally can now that the history section has been cleaned up. Any more issues that you have, tell me and I'll try to clean up.
2. Mario7 (talk) This is an excellent article. It has a detailed history section, there is a lot of information on her, and it has a nice appearance.

Removal of Support/Oppose Votes

EpicRosalina and Mario7

1. Ashley and Red (talk) @EpicRosalina, if you do it I may remove my vote. @Mario7: this isn't great, the story section is messed up and VERY detailed, this needs an trim. Also, are you blind???There is a rewrite template!!!!FA's can't have it.
2. Time Turner (talk) The article still has some very glaring flaws, as mentioned by Icemario. It is certainly far from being an excellent article. Remember, quality over quantity, and less can be more.

Comments

@Epic Rosalina: What's been done was the tip of the iceberg; the article still reeks of flowery writing, still really needs some serious trimming, there's one instance of the writing looking personal and there are still several cases of misused tenses.Icemario (talk)