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Mario & Luigi: Dream Team

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1. Sparks (talk) I looked over the article for Mario & Luigi: Dream Team and it looks very polished and well made. There's plenty of information about the plot, enemies and features as well as links leading to the more detailed pages. I honestly can't find a single issue but if there are any, I will do whatever it takes to get this article to Featured Status.
2. Tails777 (talk) I think the article looks fine.
3. Killer Moth (talk) Looked through the article and it looks to be in good quality.

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I'm not a fan of the character section just being a list with no images or descriptions. The Mario & Luigi: Partners in Time is also featured and it at least offers pictures. - Nintendo101 (talk) 19:36, May 6, 2024 (EDT)

That's an issue I can address. I'll get to work on that! Sparks (talk) 19:38, May 6, 2024 (EDT)

I second the character list idea, and I have a few suggestions:

• There needs to be a list of items and objects with images and descriptors, like Paper Mario: The Origami King and Mario_&_Luigi:_Partners_in_Time#Blocks.2C_switches.2C_and_other_features. I see a couple articles in Category:Mario & Luigi: Dream Team objects and Category:Mario & Luigi: Dream Team items that aren't mentioned anywhere here.
• Locations could be a good idea for a table, maybe listing the numbers of hidden beans and Pi'illos for real world areas and which Luiginary transformations are used in Dream World ones. Look at Paper Mario: The Origami King for an example.
• Could Bros. Attacks be a table? They're a pretty big part of gameplay, so listing them all out might be a good idea.
• Most glaringly, I don't see a list or even a mention of most of the game's key items. They're all listed here.
• Could a breakdown of Mario and Luigi's stats somewhere in the gameplay section be useful?

I've beaten the game a couple of times myself, so I can help out with anything you need. Scrooge200 (talk) 20:48, May 6, 2024 (EDT)

Currently I'm creating a chart for all the characters in the game on my sandbox. I will use images (primarily artwork) and provide detailed descriptions for each of them. If there aren't any images available, I'll just take a screenshot and use that. I will take your suggestions by the way. Sparks (talk) 20:52, May 6, 2024 (EDT)

I just got done with my character charts! Would it be OK if I added them to the article? If there are flaws with them, I can fix them. Sparks (talk) 22:47, May 6, 2024 (EDT)

Nice work. I do think it would look a little nicer if sprites were used instead of artwork, and if they were not scaled. That is how enemies are displayed in the article and it would make the article look more uniform as a whole if they matched. - Nintendo101 (talk) 23:31, May 6, 2024 (EDT)

That would work! I'll do sprites for the charts! Sparks (talk) 23:33, May 6, 2024 (EDT)

Looking at your sandbox page, I would prefer if information relating to real world and dream world locations were done in seperate tables rather than having it all crammed into one and using brackets to distinguish information relating to the two worlds for everything. Listing all bosses and enemies for each location is a bit redundant since the dedicated enemies section does that already; the Origami King article which this is based off doesn't include an enemies section. Nightwicked Bowser 10:54, May 7, 2024 (EDT)

I could create two different charts - one for the real world and one for the Dream World. What Iintend to do is display the Bean and Pi'illo information in the real world and show the Luiginary Works in the Dream World charts. Both will show Bros. and Luiginary Attacks. Sparks (talk) 11:06, May 7, 2024 (EDT)

I'm making great progress on the article! How does it look? Sparks (talk) 15:55, May 7, 2024 (EDT)